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Posted by: Kat
« on: September 19, 2022, 03:24:50 pm »

It's a very well written story. Like Kier, I could identify with Peter. However, unlike Peter in the story, I don't think I'd have accepted any affection from my uncle and aunt or come to any sort of resolution with adults who are such nasty, authoritarian bullies. Peter comes off as a pretty typical adolescent, who is hardly deserving of the degree of harsh punishment he receives. I commend Pete Gradson on developing his characters so well. They certainly evoked an emotional response.

Kat
Posted by: afinch
« on: September 19, 2022, 02:13:10 pm »

Yes, it's a wonderful story.  Despite the English setting, I could totally identify with Peter.
Posted by: db105
« on: September 19, 2022, 05:04:37 am »

Taken In Hand by Pete Gradson
https://malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=51930

I found this story really impressive. I particularly enjoyed how well the main character's inner thoughts and reactions are shown.

Full disclosure: I know the author, as I'm doing some roleplaying with him. That does not change the fact that the story is excellent.