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Posted by: Zyngaru
« on: October 15, 2023, 04:19:42 pm »

HBB,

You may tell Mogg that this story pushes all of my buttons.  I love how just one boy is n u d e at the beginning and by the end of the party they are all n u d e.  That makes for the perfect party and the boys know it's happening and are enjoying themselves.  I absolutely love the Birthday cake sequence.  I wonder why I never thought of such a wonder experience to have at a birthday party.  I love the regression sequence.  At first you wonder what the boy thinks about this happening and then realize he desires it, but fights it, lightly, to make it even more interesting.  I love the dare sequence.  Boys actually playing the Dare game and enjoying it.  Absolutely wonderful.  They best thing about the Dare sequence, even boys that are just party guests, get involved in the party through this game.  Every boy that attends the party know he will be part of the overall experience in a very personal way.  So, he knows he will receive six of these parties as the Birthday Boy and will attend well over a hundred of these parties as a boy guest.  Just a wonderful tradition.  You can also let Mogg know that he stayed within my boundaries of preference, even though I know he didn't touch on many of your preferences.  I thoroughly enjoyed his story.
Posted by: HumbledBareBoy
« on: October 13, 2023, 05:18:39 pm »

LINK: https://moggstories.blogspot.com/2023/10/a-birthday-party-story.html

In this case, the author is actually not associated with MMSA itself, but rather through a different story archive (i.e., the FNA, formerly hosted on ASSTR) where he found some of my writings that were, well, a bit too much for the content guidelines at the former, haha! As luck would have it, Mogg and I actually have uncannily overlapping mutual likes and preferences, leading to an ongoing correspondence which has been most pleasing to me. With respect to this story, though, it all boils down to his brief italicized blurb prior to the opening:

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This story is largely inspired by the writings of HumbledBareBoy. Any similarity between his stories and the following is intentional.

Carol and I had been dating for just over six months. Maybe it was because her family thought we were getting serious that her sister invited us both to attend her son’s birthday party to be held the following week. I should explain that Carol was the youngest of four sisters and the only one as yet unmarried. Carol and I had a chaste relationship, something that she insisted on observing right from the outset. I found celibacy difficult to cope with at first, but I remained loyal to Carol’s wishes and this strengthened our relationship. Carol and I were both in our mid-twenties and I wondered why we were being invited to the birthday party of a thirteen year old boy, her nephew, Joshua...